No Clear Winner
“You two get to come inside today since it is so snowy and cold,”
said Penny and Buddy’s owner.
The two were normally
outside dogs since they were slightly on the larger size and were both very
playful. Penny and Buddy were best friends who loved to do everything together.
Even though they were best friends the two also were very competitive with each
other. They couldn’t play fetch without the game turning into a race to see who
could get the ball first. They couldn’t play tug-of-war without a clear winner.
Most certainly, they could not wrestle without a clear winner as well.
Buddy and Penny fighting on a normal day. I found this image on Wikimedia Commons. |
By getting to come inside, the dogs really didn’t know how to just
sit there and behave. Penny would try to jump on the couch which would make her
owner mad. Buddy would try to chew on a shoe which upset the owner as well. After
trying to be good dogs for a while in the living room, it wasn’t before too
long that Buddy decided he would pester Penny. He decided to playfully bite her
as he did before most of the times the two would wrestle, so Penny knew what
was going on. She then decided to claw at him in return to approve that she
wanted to wrestle as well.
As one can imagine it wasn’t too long before the dogs began
running around the living room tackling, biting, and clawing at each other.
There owner kept telling them to stop but didn’t sound as serious as he did
earlier when he got onto them. This meant that the two kept going until Penny
tackled Buddy into the sharp part of the chimney. As Buddy was struck with
pain, he showed no sign of weakness, and instead became very mad as he growled
and barked while he simultaneously lunged at Penny and bit harder than usual.
Immediately, the two were no longer just having a friendly
competition, but instead this became a true fight between them. They were growling,
biting, and clawing with all of their might causing a huge scene in the living
room to which upset their owner. As their owner grew upset, for he was tired of
having to deal with the two misbehaving dogs, he decided to grab his newspaper
from the coffee table.
WHACK! WHACK! Before either dog knew it, they were struck with the
newspaper so hard that they both forgot what they were doing in the first
place. The owner grabbed buddy by the collar, who was on top of Penny, and
dragged him to the washroom. He then came back for Penny who was trying to find
a place to hide before she too was being yanked by the collar. He put Penny in
the guest bathroom before she could even try to resist.
Then loudly he yelled “SINCE NEITHER OF YOU CAN BEHAVE OR PLAY
NICE, BOTH OF YOU WILL BE LOCKED UP FOR THE REST OF THE DAY!”
It was then that both dogs started whimpering to come out which
lasted the rest of the day. Although neither dog would admit it, they both
realized that they can go a bit too far with their competitions, and on this day there was no clear winner.
Author's Note:
This story is based on The Contest from Mahabharata in which Bhima and Duryodhana are competing with each other. The way they are competing in this story is through a fight that really wasn't too serious at first. However, as the two continue fighting they both begin to become more prideful and the mock fight turns into a real one. As the two are now fighting with anger involved, a third challenger, Arjuna, enters the fight. Arjuna is clearly a better warrior than the other two and with his bow and arrow he ends up completely dominating the two for a victory. In my story, I wanted to make a more playful, modern version of a playful fight turning serious. In my story, Penny and Buddy represent Bhima and Duryodhana. I had the two be friends because I felt this added a more personal connection with the two wanting to win especially when they got too aggressive and the playful wrestling turned into an actual fight. Instead of having a third warrior enter the fight, I decided that it would have the dog's owner be the person who ultimately wins the fight between the dogs, as did Arjuna between the other two warriors. I felt that this was a good way to show that sometimes we can get too serious in out play with others, and there is someone else who can always ultimately beat you in whatever competition it is.
Bibliography:
The Contest from Mahabharata, Epic of the Bharatas, by Romesh C. Dutt (1898).
Hi Gavin!
ReplyDeleteThis story is so cute! I like how you use dogs to tell the story because who doesn't like dogs? When the dogs started fighting and the owner picked up the newspaper I thought he was just going to just sit back and read it. It was pretty funny when he whacked them both. I really like how you ended the story with a lesson. I'm wondering if either dog felt guilty after they realized neither of them were going to win. I also like how the owner ultimately wins. What or who does the owner represent though?
Hey Gavin,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story because dogs are man's best friend. I was able to connect and get in to the reading easily with your style of writing. One image that came to mind when i read your story was of the Clown and the newspaper from the old movie "Air Bud". Not sure if anyone who reads this will know or remember this movie. I really liked your story and I look forward to reading more.
Hey Gavin great story! Reading this was entertaining because it was such a different spin on the original story. Putting your two dogs as the main characters in the story made it a lot more entertaining to read, and still kept to the original story of Bhima and Duryodhana. Great job on this story I look forward to reading more.
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